Re-write the storyline of Starwars Episodes 7-9 without deviating from the following key elements of the story to improve upon it.

Key elements that cannot be altered:
Ep 7: Rey gets captured by Kylo, Finn runs into Poe
Ep 8: Luke rejects Rey, Luke dies, Vice Admiral Holdo sacrifices herself
Ep 9: Palpatine's return
Note: These character interactions / returns / deaths need not occur in the same manner as depicted in the movies

You will be graded from 1 to 10 for each episode for a potential total of 30 points.
If you only submit for Ep7, it means your maximum points can only be 10 out of 30.
The re-write does not need to include a script or extensive dialogues, but rather a noteform overview of the storyline will suffice.

You may only submit one re-write for each episode.
I may form a panel to judge it (potentially TCCOM, SOO, COO + BGCOMs x3)

1st Place: IS-PR
2nd Place: IS-GR
3rd Place: IS-SR
4th Place: IS-BR
5th Place: IS-CR

Best Episode 7 rewrite: IS-SR
Best Episode 8 rewrite: IS-SR
Best Episode 9 rewrite: IS-SR

For each Episode rewrite: ORA (i.e. a maximum of 3 ORAs)